正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend named lucy. he has big eyes and golden hair. He is very tall and his skin is very white. He can speak fluent English. he always wear a blue hat and green jeans. He used to go to gym at the weeken. so , he is very strong. We all like him.