文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend named lucy. He has big eyes and golden hair. He is very tall and his skin is very white. He can speak fluent English. he always wear a blue hat and was in a green jeans. He used to go to gym at the weekend. So, he is very strong. We all like him.