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In today's business world,manufacturers are used to use advertising to let everybody know more about their particular products,so that they can sale more products.Many people have their own views on advertising,some people think it will brings benefits to us,but others don't think so.And in my opinion,advertising not just simple as its shows,we must be wise when we look it. Why I say so much like that?There are some of my views about the advertisement.First of all,this is an informations world,and we need information to make sure ourselves will not be old-fashion.Advertising can provide much informations about the products to us,and we can acquire a lot informations we need from that,so that our lives can be more convenient.However,we should also realize that many manufacturers deliberately offer something wrong to us in order to sale their products.As a result of that,a lot of people were misled by them,and it also led to a faith panic.It cause a negative effect on the society. To sum up,advertisements is not only can offer some convenience for we,but also could bring we into a terrible situation.To avoid cheated by them,all of us must be more sensible when we deal with this matter.
