题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
With the development of social that the measures of cheat are more and more virous.For example,the internert cheat is vary prevalent in the recent yares.So how on maintaining trust that wis concerned from meny people. As to this issue,opinions vary from person to person,some people hold that take strong measures to parnel those cheater,because it is distory the morial of peoples and order of social.But others maintain that let people lerenning how on maintaining trust,if everyone has learnned how on maintaining trust that our social will more and more humore. As far as I am concerned,first and formost,we have to let people seeing the advantages of on maintaining trust and seeing this problems of lose trust.