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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6310
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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With the development of social that the measures of cheat are more and more various.For example,the internet cheat is vary prevalent in the recent years.So how on maintaining trust that wis concerned from many people. As to this issue,opinions vary from person to person,some people hold that take strong measures to panel those cheater,because it is destory the morality of peoples and order of social.But others maintain that let people lerenning how on maintaining trust,if everyone has learnned how on maintaining trust that our social will more and more humore. As far as I am concerned,first and foremost,we have to let people seeing the advantages of on maintaining trust and seeing this problems of lose trust.

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