题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
With the development of social that the measures of cheat are more and more various.For example,the internet cheat is vary prevalent in recent years.So how on maintaining trust that wis concerned from many people. As to this issue,opinions vary from person to person,some people hold that take strong measures to panel those cheaters,because it is destroy the morality of peoples and order of social.But others maintain that let people lerening how on maintaining trust,if everyone has learned how on maintaining trust that our social will more and more humored. As far as I am concerned,first and foremost,we have to let people seeing the advantages of on maintaining trust and seeing this problems of lose trust.