句式变化多样;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It is not wise that make a conclusion as soon as listen to or look at something, there might be some wrong with your jusjiment. there are many story to turn it out to be bed. I will inlustate my own experience to show this evidence. Mary had been my best firend, one day, someone tell me she do a betary to me and spread may secret to others which made me so angry. I am too sad to listen to he explan, as a result, l lose my best firend. as a role in dedicat noval had siad "there must be some ture underlying its surface." we should not to look at instead look into something arrounding us, expeicily, when we take into some situation in which wounld effect us a lot.
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