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use money in a resonable way With the development of society,our life become better and better.consequently,people spend lots of money in eating,shoping,and travelling.There are various of coupons attracting customers.So many people followed by blind,expecially our students,because we may think we get a discont and also save money!however,it is totally opposite.it takes more on what we don't really need.As a student,i hold the view that we should use money in a reasonable way.we are supposed to have our own sense of worth.Use money in waht we really need. First of all,as a student,we should put our heart in the study,not in how to use money.Due to the fact that we have no competence in making money,but get money from our parents who make money difficutily and hard.Second, I think it is triditional for us to save money.what's more ,in china,it is a good habihit of saving money. As far as i am concerned,we students should use money in a reasonable way,not only sve money,but also form a good habit.