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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33563[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
评语:

文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇表达较熟练丰富度不够,但请检查文章的单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

use money in a resonable way With the development of society,our life become better and better.consequently,people spend lots of money in eating,shoping,and travelling.There are various of coupons attracting customers.So many people followed by blind,expecially our students,because we may think we get a discont and also save money!however,it is totally opposite.it takes more on what we don't really need.As a student,i hold the view that we should use money in a reasonable way.we are supposed to have our own sense of worth.Use money in waht we really need. First of all,as a student,we should put our heart in the study,not in how to use money.Due to the fact that we have no competence in making money,but get money from our parents who make money difficutily and hard.Second, I think it is triditional for us to save money.what's more ,in china,it is a good habihit of saving money. As far as i am concerned,we students should use money in a reasonable way,not only sve money,but also form a good habit.

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