高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

my favorite sport is play football ，by chance ，in go to home pack up football ，then my and my friends play ,,we favourite play football. my and my students altogether play and have a rice . my favourite football plays is beilehanmu my hope become aprofessional football player. i like football ,i like it.