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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Autumn Outing Notice Student union will have an autumn outing on December 27. If you are freshmen and want to join in, please enter name to student union before Thursday of this week. According to the schedule, we will assemble at school gate at 7:00 A.M on December 27. But you call leave your baggage in the left and take your lunch. We will visit the botanical garden and watch show--[person and nature] on forenoon. At afternoon, we will visit the Summer Palace. Please be on time. The student union December 23, 2013
