2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Right now mang people already start go shopping on the Internet.That's action change very fashion. Because on online shopping have many adventage.for example. When we have no time . on online shopping can help our save time.very convenience.the have many cheap thing on the online. Although have good many on online shopping.But have many problems.For example If we bought clothes on online shopping.Maybe it's no suit our.pack arrived have delay. That's my advice.first we shouldn't often online.bacause,that's we eyes hurts. we can go shopping to supermarket.second often online shopping maybe we bought no suit our cothes.