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It’s almost known to all that smoking is bad for people’s health. It can cause heart disease, cancer and other possible diseases. A report says two and a halft millions of people die of diseases related to smoking. Since smoking is such a bad habit, why people dont' give it up? The main reason is that nicotine in the tobacco makes smokers addictive to it. Another reason is the lack of strong determination from the smokers. Now many measures have been take to help smoker giving up smoking, such as warning people against the harm of smoking, prohibitting smoking in public places, not allowing tobacco adverts in newspapper, setting up International No Smoking Day. But if a smoker can give up this bad habit or not depends compeletely on himself. Without a strong determination he cannot succeed to quit smoking.
