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It’s almost known to all that smoking is bad for people’s health. It can cause heart disease, cancer and other possible diseases. A report says two and a half millions of people die of diseases related to smoking. Since smoking is such a bad habit, why don't people give it up? The main reason is that nicotine contained in the tobacco makes smokers addictive to it. Another reason is the lack of strong determination from the smokers. Now many measures have been taken to help smokers giving up smoking, such as warning people against the harm of smoking, prohibitting smoking in public places, not allowing tobacco adverts in newspapper,setting up International No Smoking Day,etc. But whether a smoker can give up this bad habit or not depends compeletely on himself. Without a strong determination he cannot succeed to quit smoking.