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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(55):SMOKING

发布时间:2014-11-27 11:01浏览次数:748
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请根据下面提示,写一篇题目为SMOKING的短文。词数100此左右。开头部分已给出。
吸烟的危害:心脏病,癌,全世界每年有二百五十万人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
戒烟难的原因:形成习惯,内含尼古丁,使人上瘾。
已采取的措施:警告人们吸烟的危害,公共场所禁止吸烟,报纸禁止香烟广告,世界无烟日设定。
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It’s almost known to all that smoking is bad for people’s health. It can cause heart disease, cancer and other possible diseases. A report says two and a half millions of people die of diseases related to smoking. Since smoking is such a bad habit, why don't people give it up? The main reason is that nicotine contained in the tobacco makes smokers addictive to it. Another reason is the lack of strong determination from the smokers. Now many measures have been taken to help smokers giving up smoking, such as warning people against the harm of smoking, prohibitting smoking in public places, not allowing tobacco adverts in newspapper,setting up International No Smoking Day,etc. But whether a smoker can give up this bad habit or not depends compeletely on himself. Without a strong determination he cannot succeed to quit smoking.

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