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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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TO: hubin@163.com FR:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Knew your new cargo that the item number is 5670 from the trade show which hold in New York from Dec 15th to Dec 22nd. We are very interested in to. Please kindly send us the price list and instructions. Thanks so much for your cooperation. Hoep we can establish business relationship.
