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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

There is no denying the fact that the appearance of a person is important. When one person meet another one at the first, what his look is the appearance. Some people often judge a person by their appearance. As far as I know, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. I have three reasons as follows. To begin with, what is the appearance of one person depend on nature when he was born. He is pretty if he has a good oral, although one person has bad face look. And more than that, the appearance of one person could change by using in technology. If he is dirty, his nature is also no change. Last but not least, some people perhaps cheat others for earing extra money using his pretty appearance. From what has been mentioned above, we can see clearly that how to judge a peson is a matter of prime impotant. It is unwise to judge a person by their apperance.

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