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假如你叫刘畅，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于电脑游戏，成绩日益下降。作为小明的朋友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封e-mail ,帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。
3、你对小明的期望。
3、文中必须包括提示中所规定的要点，并可适当发挥。
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Xiao Ming, How are you doing recently? We take pride in that you are good at playing computer games. Computers are more and more important in our lives. Playing games on them can help us know more about computers, which is very useful for our future lives. But if you are addicted to it, it’ll be quite harmful to you. It is not only bad for your health but also has bad influence to your study to spend too much time playing them. If students are addicted to the computer games.It will make students or teenagers go to the wrong life roads. Computer is a a sword with two blades a double-bladed sword.It can help people know the more knowledge.But,it can also make people into a wrong road. Yours, Liu Chang
