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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

There is no denying the fact that the appearance of a person is important. When one person meet another one at the first, what his look is the appearance. Some people often judge a person by their appearance. As far as I know, it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. I have three factors as follows. To begin with, what is the appearance of one person depend on nature when he was born. He is pretty if he has a good character, although one person look not good. And more than that, the appearance of one person could change by using in technology. If he is dirty, his nature is also no change. Last but not least, some people perhaps cheat others for having extra money using his beautiful face. From what has been mentioned above, we can see clearly that how to judge a person is a matter of prime important. It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.

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