小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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sally is my good friend.we are in the numble fortenn middle school and we are cassmates. Everday we go to scholl together .she is a beautiful girl ,she have big eyes and two small eres ,small mouth ,break long hair .we all like wathing tV show ,every friday,after ou do the homework ,we watching tv shows together.