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【题目要求】
A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
【题目分析】
这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意：不要只说my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。人们会喜欢的有：女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围；人们会讨厌的有：交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇量积累不错，文中存在一些拼写错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Sichuan is noted as 'Land of Abandance'.The famous actor Zhang Yimou said that Chengdu is a city where those people who travel there don't want to leave. It is the highest eatimate for Chengdu. Chengdu has many advantages whcich make many people like there.First, Chengdu is the largest city in Sichuan and develop well.There has been many beautiful natural park and places of interest.Huanglongxi and Du Fu Thatched Cottage are two famouse human landscapes. People who invite there wll acquire much information from the two sites about the history they have never been carefull. Second, Chengdu is a modern and fashionable city.It is common that many girls wearing beautiful and fashionable clothes are seen in the street.What's more,as many famous companies and supermarkets has been run there, people can buy whatever you really want conveniently. Third,Chengdu is a plain and has a good climate which isn't too hot or too cold.which is very suitable for people to live.At the same time ,the slower speed of living is the other facter for people to settle there. However,Chengdu still has some demerits.I woild like to expore two ones. Firstly,the traffic is big problem for people to go out. If one has no one private car, he will spend more time.Second,Although the climate isn't extramely cold or hot, it is quit moist. From what has been discussed above,people will aware of the Chengdu more or less. Chengdu maybe isn't a ferfect city,but when one who has gone there like there.
