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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Information nowadays can travel in high speed as we can image.Great amounts of information spring up in our daily lives.However,much of this information may disgusted us,which have the good chance to be a poverty of attention.For that irrelevant information,I think what we ought to do is to ignore it. To shift our attention to a kind of information what we call the information of health.This is the type of information that tells you what you should eat and what you shouldn't.There was a time when some so-called experts said that people are supposed to eat garlic as much as we could.Obviously,this is a total lie.Out of everyone's surprise,there should have been a lot of people believed this.Hence,garlic in every supermarket was bought,which resulted in those businessmen to rise the price of garlic.There was a terrible mess in China.On the contrary,scientists proved this wrong,then this wave was calmed.Since this information brought bad influence,people have learned that they should not have believe the information about health so easily.Therefore,people started to disgust this kind of information let alone other irrelevant information. Last but not least,when we come across annoying news,what we must do if just to ignore it and tell others do not be fooled.
