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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第29篇:人类活动与地球的关系

发布时间:2013-08-13 17:26浏览次数:1097
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live.

What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


有人认为人类活动是在破坏地球,而有人认为人类活动是在改善地球。你持有哪种观点,并给出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Nowadays, what a hot topic is some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. while others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live.In my view, human activity is changing the world more lively and harmony. As we all know, objectively, human activity aims at making sound life by working hard.Meanwhile, it is unavoidable that the activity will bring some negative influence. thus the disadvantage is acceptable. which doesn't mean that I agree the activity harmed the Earth.And what we can do is to reverse the situation, at the same time, try our best to contrete the available environment. In conclusion, Making a sound environment is our goal, though there will be several problem coming by the activity. But our dream will come true when we have a tencious mind.

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