小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Jim is my best friend,he is a good man.Now you can see a photo on my desk is his family.Looks like happiness.On the left is his father,he is a nice and kindly man.he is a engieer.In his spare time,he likes cooking when we go to his home.Sometime he likes reading.His mother is a teacher,she is a gentle woman.She works hard on her school everyday.Jim woks a company,he is an designer.He is verypopular in his company.I'm very luckly knew them.They gave me much love.I wish happiness all of them.