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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Jack is my a foreign friend,he is going to visit my hometown.Because I aways tell he that my hometown is a beautiful city in china,so he is very interestting to my hometown. I aways think that I should take him to going somewhere,because this places have different good that the make choose is vary difficut to me.But I have to make choose,finally I choose take him to see the historical place that have significant meanning to China builing.It is all-know a place that is Zunyi session. As to this choose,I will explain why choose this place.At first,if he want konw my hometown,he must know my hometown`s histoy.Second,this place have a lot of local culture.so this is my why choose this place.

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