2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As far as I am concerned, there are a great numbers of factors leading to succeed, however, a strong will surely is the most significant factor. A person will meet with many unexpected difficulties at his way to succeed, and at that time, a large number of them may give up, so that only the person with a strong will can carry on. To put it another way, we can hold the brief that only a strong will person can achieve the great mission. For instance, Marx, the most famous philosopher, lived a difficult life several decades. When he decided to insist on, he succeed. There is no doubt that students are the same. If you never study hard, it is sure that you will not to be a successful person. At the result, you are required to study hard if you have a dream about succeed.