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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
dear parents. i am fine. do you know how much i miss you？when i miss mum and father i would take out photoes and think the days we together. i am so busy that i don not care for you.i feel very sory about that.but i know mum and dad will awalys stay with me and cheer me up.therefore, i aways be full of abilitied that make me to do well and broden my horizon.sometimes i feel tired and want to give up.however i did not do that.
