2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Increasing use of the mobile phone Nowadys,a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life.People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in orser to see. In the first place,more and more people used mobile phone ,as far as i am concerned,mobile phone have a great effect on everybaby.In the second place,a wider range of mobile phone using all over the word.Last but not least, people alraedly overusing it,a varirty of phone game and so on. In a word,mobile phone have a great effect on people,and a broad range,