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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12943
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;作者词汇表达丰富度不足,也请仔细检查文章的单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Dear parents. I am fine. do you know how much i miss you?When i miss mum and dad i would take out photos and thinking the days we together. I am so busy that i don not care for you.I feel very sory about that.But i know mum and dad will aways stay with me and cheer me up.Therefore, i aways be full of abilitied that make me to do well and broden my horizon.Sometimes i feel tired and want to give up.However i did not do that.

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