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句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The Benefits of Volunteering Nowadays,a major sum of people tend to be a volunteer .It does benefit thier life which can help them make frinds and develop a good value . Above all,you can make a lot of friends who have a common goal if you join in the volunteer work.As we all know ,finding a ture friend is not a easy thing.However,when you help people with your heart-warming,people doing the same thing may be attract by your characteristic.Second,you can built up the shape of your value opinion.You will wide your horizon,learning something you can not get from your book or teaching,such as a unforgettable experience.Sticking to help people who need your help, you may turely konw the means of "where there is will,there is a way." In a word,volunteering is a wise way for your life.
