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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;能够使用一些不错的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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With the popular use of computer,we people seemed to come into a sort of habits that we employ computer to deal with various things of life in modern society.It is increasingly indispensable for our studying and working in our daily life.Even though computer plays a great role for all of us,there are also some people holding diverse views to the relations of people and computer. There is no denying that every thing has its positive power and negative power.Computer takes convenience to citizens meanwhile it give rise to some confusing issue,which arouse a heating discussion.Some argue that the advantages of its usage outweigh disadvantages while others think we can live without computer. On my personnel level,we shouldn't be extremists,on the contrary,only make full use of the computer can we embrace a favourable working environment.

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