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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3531[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

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作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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As the saying goes, one should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older. I could not agree with the idea, as for the life is a studying process in my mind. For me a example, when I graduated from college, didn't work as a doctor instead of a mananger. So it is obvious that I should learn new and abundant knowleage in order to cater to my job. and how common that when we meet accidents or events in either work or life, the knowleage is more important to solve the problems. In modern society, if one is a little older, that doesn't mean one should stop stepping toward knowleage. In contrary, we should try our best to reading more book and learn more knowleage so as to prove our value. The more knowleage we learn, the more wonderful life we will enjoy.

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