作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;学术词汇使用熟练,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowaday,tourism is a booming business in china.With the china economy is more and more development ,tourism is become a choice of more and more population.yet,with the tourism more popular,the diffences of the tourism influence grew large. Some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment,while others don't think so.In my opinion,people should be look at that objectively.All thinks considered,the resonable development of tourism is contribute to the china economy development,but didn't pay attention to preseve the tourist areas environment,that will bring harm to the environment.In fact,not the tourism development damage to the environment,but the shallow of awareness to environmental concerns .On the onehand,some others coutrise are vary good at environmental tourist attractions.On the other hand,we usually whatching the news chinese destroy scenic.And that is the evidence. All in all,we should try to bringing our awareness to environmental concerns.