2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

可适当增加从句和复合句的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Making conclusion instantly when you see or hear something is not wise.The following will tell you why. For the first thing, the information exposed to you isn't always right.A lot of time, it's ok, but there is some time that you will tricked by that. The next is that you are not wise enough to make a good conclusion immidieatly. As the limition of our age, what we know is just the small part of an iceberg. The last but most important is the concequence we may face if we did it. We gonne never konw what would happen when one had down. What we can do is just predicting. So in this mention, we should think twice before we do anything nor making any conclusion. Just adjust our habbit and we would have a more good place to live.