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文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Around the modern campus, student’s wasting money has been a common phenomenon. There are some college students wearing branded clothes, using the high-tech appliances such as Ipod, Iphone and Ipad. They waste money in different ways,just like net-shopping ,bars etc.. Nevertheless ,what is the causes of the college students’ irrational consumption? In recent years, China economy has obtained great development. While living standard on the rise, parents are willing to spend much more on their children. Meanwhile, they don’t wanna see the kids suffer hardships. College students haven’t form a rational consumption yet ,even they’re lazy to handling the pocket money.In another dimension, the young are vanity to compare. Even though luxuries are beyond their economic range. For college students haven’t had their own economic capacity, I absolutely oppose the view that college students’ high-consuming lifestyle.
