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作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Around the modern campus, student’s wasting money has been a common phenomenon. There are some college students wearing branded clothes, using the high-tech appliances such as Ipod, Iphone and Ipad. They also waste money in different ways,just like net-shopping,bars etc.. Nevertheless,what is the causes of the college students’ irrational consumption? In recent years, China economy has gained great development. While living standard on the rise, parents are willing to spend much more for their children. Meanwhile, they don’t want to see the kids suffer hardships. College students haven’t form a rational consumption yet,even they’re lazy to handling the pocket money.In another dimension, the young are vanity to compare. Even though luxuries are beyond their economic range. For college students haven’t had their own economic ability, I absolutely oppose the view that college students’ high-consuming lifestyle. We should advocate rational consumption in college students. Spending money properly on books or sports makes you to live a better life. Don’t be high-consuming lifestyle’s slaves.
