初中英语命题作文真题演练(60):假如你有一百万

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in china,if i have 100 million ,i will been involved in the charity cause in recent years .according to a report in china daily ,china had 410 thoussand registered charitable organizations .i will give some of the money to charity .althroudh charity work in china still has some problems ,such as lack of professional management and transparency. one big problem is that the public does not trust many charity organizations.studies show that most people who support he charity cause in china admit that they have no idea how or where their donation are used.many people perfer to donate directly to the people who need help . also i will travel around the world .