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nowadays it is commmon for young people to follow some trends in smoking. so there is brief that smoking is bad for our health and i think this arguments is true to some extent/. thare are numerous reasons why i support this opinion and i would explore a few of the most important ones here . to start with , it is bad for our lung and even kill us coldly .thak a student smoke too much for example . another factor contributing to this situation is it can costs us much money and affect our normal life .furthermore , some of p in order to smoke to do something to against the law .theeforce , i tend to think highly of it is wrong for this . howver, in real life ,we can also see some p steal money or drop out to get cigarettes . in conalusion, i am convinced that the popularity of it is an irreversible trend . it is natural for p to do it and this phenomenon has become more and more apparent in the commericalised society.
