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初中英语命题作文真题演练(61):吸烟有害身体健康

发布时间:2014-01-15 17:29浏览次数:382
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吸烟有害身体健康,这是我们都知道的道理,但是现在有不少中学生认为抽烟的样子很酷,偷偷地开始学着抽烟。请以“Smoking is bad for health”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,说明吸烟的危害,并呼吁中学生远离香烟。
参考词汇:lung肺,nicotine尼古丁,addicted to上瘾

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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;如果增加些复杂句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Smoking is bad for health Nowadays some students start to smoke because they think it makes them look cool. But in fact, smoking is bad for their health. First, as everyone knows, smoking is bad for the lungs. People who smoke a lot are likely get lung cancer and die earlier than expected. Second, smoking pollutes the air. If someone is smoking, people around them can be harmed by breathing in the polluted air. Third, cigarettes have nicotine in them. Nicotine can get people addicted to smoking. Once they start, it will be hard to give up. I hope more and more students can realize the problem. Those who have started should stop smoking. As a matter of fact, the best way to fight smoking is never to start.

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