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初中英语命题作文真题演练(62):试卷

发布时间:2014-01-15 17:30浏览次数:303
要求:
老师手里有份没有写名字的试卷没有人认领,成绩是100分。
请帮助老师分析一下这份试卷是班里哪位同学的。字数要求80—100。(参考词汇:tidy,good handwriting,top student,full mark)

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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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i have a paper which is get a 100 mark but not tag name .so i have already hand out all the pparers so if someone would ,t get his paper. this is may be his paper .please everyone to attention .i think various reasons may lead to the result.to start with ,the most common cause is he forget fill in his name .on top of this ,it is on purpose to let the teacher to guess whose is the paper,s owner . finally ,apart from the reasons mentaion above, in my opionuon, throiugh the hand writing ,the full mark is belong to the top students .thereforce, this unfavourable exoerience should be not welcomed by u

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