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How should parents help children to be independent? In a fimaly,their children are honey,whatever,they want to their chlid listen themselves,also.However,in the experts point,the way is badly for child ,because child grew progress was stopped,they only relayed to their parents,themselves lacked of thinking so that they do thing obained a sult is neglected, In order to decrease this thing happening,our parents must do three steps.Firstly,when a child have problem ,our parents are helping ,contray,you should obviously watch untill they ask for you,why?through experts researched,this phnomonon is the child really think about it.Secondly,when a child have a thinking,a child can chart wirh you,so you needn't to worry about them,our experts asked child communicating with parents.Thirdly,parents should take care of actully a child's daily life, we should let child havs a plenty of space,we belive our parents do this three steps,your child didn't rely on you.
