2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this,I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.In light of this,I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.