2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

With the develop of technic that the use of computer more and more large,the people more and more rely computer to deal with daily routine.For example,the people use the computer to sead and recive e-mail,commucation with friends,work and play.The use of computer not only taking convenience,but also decrease the time and space. As to this issue,many people hold different opinions,the use of computer also taking negtive side.It is unhealthy that a lot of persons spend all of they time on play,many experts point out that physical exercise contributies directly to a person`s physical fitness,so all play of computer is not good to physical fitness.We should take strong measures to pretect our fitness. In a word,we should ispire the advantage of use of computer and abandon Its disadvantage.