2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

With the develop of technic that the use of computer more and more large,the people more and more rely computer to deal with daily routine.For example,the people use the computer to send and receive e-mail,communication with friends,work and play.The use of computer not only taking convenience,but also decrease the time and space. As to this issue,many people hold different opinions,the use of computer also taking negative side.It is unhealthy that a lot of persons spend all of they time on play,many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person`s physical fitness,so all play of computer is not good to physical fitness.We should take strong measures to protect our fitness. In a word,we should inspire the advantage of use of computer and abandon Its disadvantage.