单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
My new teacher will come. Today, a new teacher come. He teach us english. He always dress in a blue coat and wear a grey hat. Although he is fifty, he looks very young and strong. He is very tall and big eyes, so it looks like a star. We all love him. His name is Jack.