小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog which is 9 years old. He is white and he always eat more, so he was very fat. Sometimes he looks like a bear. He walk slowly and a little lazy. But we all love it. His name is Smith and his nickname is Buddy. He always walk with me when i go out for a walk. He has been a good friend for me.