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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:30浏览次数:3028
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One argument states that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background. The opposing argument says that only the elite students should be allowed to proceed.

Discuss these ideas. Explain why.

是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力。你的看法是?并给出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

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用户练习作文:

There is no doubt that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background. Although everyone have their own opinion when they face this question, the opportunity is equal to everyone all over the world. The reasons why not only the elite students should be allowed to proceed, but also the common students should be encouraged to go to school. First of all, equality of opportunity works for everyone in our daily life, which reflects the respect between people and people. Secondly, if everyone enjoys the higher education, the civilization of human beings will be rapidly improved. The last but not the least, the communication will be effective and efficiency meeting people with higher education, and the most important is that the society will be more harmony. So how obviously the affect will show, and the higher education plays a major role in our life, or somewhat. Please give back the equal opportunity for studying to everyone, then, we can trust that the world will be sound and healthy.

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