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Nowadays,it is common to household hotel,many people like it,because it is very convent thing.Now l'd like to tell you about household hotel in my hometown,single room is need to 30yuan everyday,however,double room is need to 20yuan for everyone in the day,20yuan per person perday for meals.You can stay in the home with the home of master.Go to eat lunch in the afternoon,it has menu and you choose to like eat food, but you myble go to cook rice for yourselvers,you are able to feel happy and comfortable in the china.