作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Nowadays,it is common to household hotel,many people like it,because it is very convent thing.Now l'd like to tell you about household hotel in my hometown,single room is need to 30yuan everyday,however,double room is need to 20yuan for everyone in the day,20yuan per person per day for meals.You can stay in the home with the home of master.Go to eat lunch in the afternoon,you choose to like eat food, but mayble you go to cook rice for yourselves,you are able to feel happy and comfortable in the china.