2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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There are many beautiful places in my country,such as the Great wall,RuShan.And my hometown also is a beautiful place,it is NanChang the capital of JiangXi there is a TENHUANGGE that many people will visit,because it has a very long history,it is famous with the TENHUANGGEXU,which was written by WANGBO.Of course it has many attractions.For example it has so beautiful construction that many experts would spend hours visiting to discover its mysteries.So i would invite you toNanChang,if you are interested.