2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

computers are of great use to our daily life . As far as work is considered,it is convenient for us to deal with huge and complex date accurately. what's more, a number of files can be stored in computer, which we want to keep for a long time. Computer shows us its strong function when it is linked to Internet.After tired work, we can play computer game and listen to music to relax ourselves. More important,we can obtain these information our need. Faced with the computer, we meet a wonderful world.Computer works so efficient that it saves our time and energy a lot.