2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Computers are of great use to our daily life. As far as work is considered,it is convenient for us to deal with huge and complex date accurately. What's more, a number of files can be stored in computer, which we intend to keep for a long time. Computer shows us its strong function when it is linked to Internet.After finishing work, we can play computer game and listen to music to relieve stress. More important,we are able to obtain information our need. Faced with the computer, we meet a wonderful world.Computer works so efficient that it saves our time and energy a lot